In days of mine being the light
And feeling your calmness at night
In winter, summer and spring
The enthusiasm for life you bring.
With pristine mist of love you wake me up
And with twinkling peace of your presence, I sleep;
In between, with warm rays of affection,
You guide me to toil with a vision.
Finally, near the sweet pool of serene forest
With content to take rest,
Sharing with birds and trees
The pure happiness, through us breeze.
Comments on 'Soulmates' by Vince,18years old,Williamsburg,Virginia,US
Beautiful, much different than most, somewhat simple yet that's where its beauty lies. I can't tell if it's purposely written that way or if it's your English (I feel like an ass saying that, sorry!) but it actually fits really well. I really enjoyed this, amazing job! MySpace URL: http://www.myspace.com/ahandfulofdust19
Comments on 'Smile' by Grunfrau, 29 years old, Portsmouth, Virginia,US
Stirring imagery but there seems to be more...like another question to ask and answer,My Space URL: http://www.myspace.com/grunfrau
Comments on "New Year Wishes" by Simon,26 years old U.K.
A poem of hope, both recognisable in its imagery and idealiastic in its vision. I particularly like the second vesrse.
Comments on 'Smile' by David,19 years old, The Depths of your Dreams, New York,US
'Nice. Poem.' MySpace URL: http://www.myspace.com/youdontagree
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Mr. Venkatesh M.R.
Written by Venkatesh M.R.
Wednesday, September 12, 2007
New Year Wishes - A Poem
Chilly mist of December
Back into deep slumber,
Making your remember
Fresh year would canter.
With mountains of hope
Try to catch clouds of different shape,
Some possessing huge ambition,
Others gather together to fulfill vision.
Peace to reign in valley and plains
For love and friendship to graze,
And fill the stomach of civilization,
To beam the content light in the New Year.
Back into deep slumber,
Making your remember
Fresh year would canter.
With mountains of hope
Try to catch clouds of different shape,
Some possessing huge ambition,
Others gather together to fulfill vision.
Peace to reign in valley and plains
For love and friendship to graze,
And fill the stomach of civilization,
To beam the content light in the New Year.
Smile - A Poem
The soft touch of rain drops
In the desert of my heart
When I gaze at horizon of beloveds face
Whose assuring emotion to traverse my days.
Pure as snow in Alps
Majestic as Himalayas
Tender as bud of rose
Her smile in me glows.
She reflect the fruits of my penance
And sapling of my life grows into tree
Nurtured by water of affection
Beaming to eternity in that moment.
In the desert of my heart
When I gaze at horizon of beloveds face
Whose assuring emotion to traverse my days.
Pure as snow in Alps
Majestic as Himalayas
Tender as bud of rose
Her smile in me glows.
She reflect the fruits of my penance
And sapling of my life grows into tree
Nurtured by water of affection
Beaming to eternity in that moment.
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