The soft touch of rain drops
In the desert of my heart
When I gaze at horizon of beloveds face
Whose assuring emotion to traverse my days.
Pure as snow in Alps
Majestic as Himalayas
Tender as bud of rose
Her smile in me glows.
She reflect the fruits of my penance
And sapling of my life grows into tree
Nurtured by water of affection
Beaming to eternity in that moment.
Comments on 'Soulmates' by Vince,18years old,Williamsburg,Virginia,US
Beautiful, much different than most, somewhat simple yet that's where its beauty lies. I can't tell if it's purposely written that way or if it's your English (I feel like an ass saying that, sorry!) but it actually fits really well. I really enjoyed this, amazing job! MySpace URL: http://www.myspace.com/ahandfulofdust19
Comments on 'Smile' by Grunfrau, 29 years old, Portsmouth, Virginia,US
Stirring imagery but there seems to be more...like another question to ask and answer,My Space URL: http://www.myspace.com/grunfrau
Comments on "New Year Wishes" by Simon,26 years old U.K.
A poem of hope, both recognisable in its imagery and idealiastic in its vision. I particularly like the second vesrse.
Comments on 'Smile' by David,19 years old, The Depths of your Dreams, New York,US
'Nice. Poem.' MySpace URL: http://www.myspace.com/youdontagree
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