In days of mine being the light
And feeling your calmness at night
In winter, summer and spring
The enthusiasm for life you bring.
With pristine mist of love you wake me up
And with twinkling peace of your presence, I sleep;
In between, with warm rays of affection,
You guide me to toil with a vision.
Finally, near the sweet pool of serene forest
With content to take rest,
Sharing with birds and trees
The pure happiness, through us breeze.
Comments on 'Soulmates' by Vince,18years old,Williamsburg,Virginia,US
Beautiful, much different than most, somewhat simple yet that's where its beauty lies. I can't tell if it's purposely written that way or if it's your English (I feel like an ass saying that, sorry!) but it actually fits really well. I really enjoyed this, amazing job! MySpace URL: http://www.myspace.com/ahandfulofdust19
Comments on 'Smile' by Grunfrau, 29 years old, Portsmouth, Virginia,US
Stirring imagery but there seems to be more...like another question to ask and answer,My Space URL: http://www.myspace.com/grunfrau
Comments on "New Year Wishes" by Simon,26 years old U.K.
A poem of hope, both recognisable in its imagery and idealiastic in its vision. I particularly like the second vesrse.
Comments on 'Smile' by David,19 years old, The Depths of your Dreams, New York,US
'Nice. Poem.' MySpace URL: http://www.myspace.com/youdontagree
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