Chilly mist of December
Back into deep slumber,
Making your remember
Fresh year would canter.
With mountains of hope
Try to catch clouds of different shape,
Some possessing huge ambition,
Others gather together to fulfill vision.
Peace to reign in valley and plains
For love and friendship to graze,
And fill the stomach of civilization,
To beam the content light in the New Year.
Comments on 'Soulmates' by Vince,18years old,Williamsburg,Virginia,US
Beautiful, much different than most, somewhat simple yet that's where its beauty lies. I can't tell if it's purposely written that way or if it's your English (I feel like an ass saying that, sorry!) but it actually fits really well. I really enjoyed this, amazing job! MySpace URL: http://www.myspace.com/ahandfulofdust19
Comments on 'Smile' by Grunfrau, 29 years old, Portsmouth, Virginia,US
Stirring imagery but there seems to be more...like another question to ask and answer,My Space URL: http://www.myspace.com/grunfrau
Comments on "New Year Wishes" by Simon,26 years old U.K.
A poem of hope, both recognisable in its imagery and idealiastic in its vision. I particularly like the second vesrse.
Comments on 'Smile' by David,19 years old, The Depths of your Dreams, New York,US
'Nice. Poem.' MySpace URL: http://www.myspace.com/youdontagree
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